Revision #1 Cover

The first revision that I made on my magazine were on the cover. What I did was that I expanded the whole picture to the edge of the canvas. Now that the picture is larger I had to adjust the title and all the text within the picture to a bigger size. When doing so, I rearrange some of my article blips, for example, in my first draft "Saks Fifth Avenue" in "Saks Fifth Avenue making a difference in the community" is positioned all in one line, in my newly revised version, "Saks Fifth" is stacked on top of "Avenue." This made the magazine cover more empty space. Overall, the main fix of the cover was to expand the picture to get rid of the thick white border as seen below.
New: top
Old: bottom